Hoshi nana(test character)

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Hoshi nana(test character)

Post  roku_nariko on Fri Jun 27, 2008 1:11 pm

Name: Hoshi nana

Gender: Male/femal

Alliance/LivingArea (for transfer students): Mizu

Age: Characters Age. 19

Looks:
male form

girl form

Clan(optional): none nown

Personality: Male:Is very diferant, can be mean but has his careing moments, when in danger is mostly mean.
Female:Is like most girls caring and can be moody.

Rank: Ambu

Skills/Specialties:
well rounded


summary of history: When in the training from birth to become a ambu hoshi fell in to a pond of cursed water that made him a girl whenever cold water hit him,l and a boy whenever hot water him.Now in his/her age he/she trains in her marshal arts, after meeting Roku in the forest and fighting his cat walk(drunk fu), he himself started to train in the arts of drunk fu.


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Re: Hoshi nana(test character)

Post  Bao/Zach on Fri Jun 27, 2008 1:14 pm

Someone is already using that picture for the female version.
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Re: Hoshi nana(test character)

Post  Bao/Zach on Fri Jun 27, 2008 1:19 pm

kk now its good, approved.
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Re: Hoshi nana(test character)

Post  Kodai/Cloud on Fri Jun 27, 2008 1:24 pm

bunch of problems

1.you didnt put both names in the name coullum
2.you should probably say Kiri
3.TO MANY SPELLING MISTAKES
4.skills....say like ninjutsu medical arts, anything like that, well rounded doesn't let ppl know what your good at
5. i cant understand your history very well its bad choice of words at points

SRY NOT APPROVED
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Re: Hoshi nana(test character)

Post  Bao/Zach on Fri Jun 27, 2008 1:51 pm

wow, i totally didnt see those.. Good work Kodai
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Re: Hoshi nana(test character)

Post  Kodai/Cloud on Fri Jun 27, 2008 1:55 pm

im special yay
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Re: Hoshi nana(test character)

Post  Bao/Zach on Fri Jun 27, 2008 2:02 pm

ed.
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Re: Hoshi nana(test character)

Post  Kodai/Cloud on Fri Jun 27, 2008 2:09 pm

sniffle..sniffle...jurk....sniffle sniffle

hides in Emo vil. XD lol
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